My Winter Story from Amanda O'Dowda on Vimeo.
Sunday 18 October 2015
Cold Winters Night
This is my best piece of writing because I put in descriptive words and I rhymed and I have painted a picture in the persons head.This is my favourite piece of writing I have ever done. My favourite sentence is. It was like Elsa entering world. And my other favourite sentence is.The ice crystals make music when they click together.
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Wow Amayah., this is a beautiful description. You have thought carefully about your word choice and your description painted a picture in my mind as I listened to you reading. I like the sentence "crispy white crystals fall from the sky like shimmering stars shinning bright so I can see." Beautiful! I wonder what a description about heat or summer would be like? From Mrs O
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