Thursday 16 February 2017

The beach picnic

( A story about the beach picnic)  I have just made a great story on personal voice here it is down the bottom hope you all like it. 


2 comments:

  1. Hi Amayah
    I like the bit where you say "freeze your legs off". Your writing certainly leaves me feeling your feelings...cold sea, dirty changing rooms after lots of people.
    Thanks for sharing, I wonder if you swam today..it did turn out hot!

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  2. Your first paragraph draws me in with the personal voice you've used Amayah. I SO know that feeling of - 'Do I HAVE to?'
    And I agree - 'Don't worry' is not such a big help is it, but that's how we Mums, (and Nans!) encourage kids.

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